Grrl Power #215 – Demonicus Revelio
I’m going to own up to it. I cannot draw butts. That literally may be only the 11th butt I’ve ever drawn. I need to work on that. Maybe the next vote incentive will just be an assload of butts. It probably won’t be. I just felt like typing “assload of butts.”
Dabbler is stronger than a human woman of the same weight. She’s actually about twice as strong as a human male of twice her weight. A proper succubus would usually downplay that most of the time – you know, guys and their egos – but Dabbler’s just as much adventurer and scrapper as she is seductress. This page is Dabbler’s first public reveal of her “Battle Form.” Whether or not people buy that explanation, Arianna will have her work cut out for her. If there was a superheroine with just little satyr horns on her forehead and no other demony characteristics, you know there would be someone freaking out about demons or gargoyles. In the first few drafts of the story, Dabbler never disguised herself, but after giving it more than a few seconds of though, I realized that the general public would have to casually accept the existence of demons and/or aliens, and that would make the Grrl Power world too different from ours. It’s supposed to be almost identical to ours, only certain historical events and people can be attributed to supers. Tech level’s the same, politics are the same. If there are super powered assassins, that means there are also super powered bodyguards. It’s mostly zero-sum. Now that all this super stuff has gone public, the world will probably begin to diverge from ours in more significant ways.
Dabbler’s sword has show up briefly in the comic before, but obviously will be more heavily featured this time around. Notice she’s not teleporting it to her hand like she did the railgun. It’s all part of her vast bag of tricks. I thought of the name Soul Reaver independently, then thought it sounded too cool not to have been used before, so I googled it and found there was a video game franchise of the same name. A third person hack and slash about, if google image search is any judge, a blue vampire with no lower jaw. I guess you could still bite people like that, though the actual sucking action would be considerably more challenging. Perhaps there was some sort of lapping motion involved. I’d like to think he hung out in the video game character’s after hours bar with Darth Malak and commiserated about beards. Anyway, I point that out because now in this scene, Dabbler is using Soul Reaver against Heavenly Sword, which was also a third person hack and slash. I’m just commenting on it so Sydney doesn’t have to.
Update: So apparently there were 2 games in a series of 5 with the name Soul Reaver in them, and across the 5 games there were two protagonists, and the one guy with no lower jaw sucked souls, not blood, which presumably did not involve biting anything. I obviously never played them, but it turns out Soul Reaver is actually a reference to a sword in the game called “The Soul Reaver” and now I’m considering renaming Dabbler’s sword. Although it’s not like Dabbler would have known about those video games and it could definitely lead to some funny discussions with Sydney who is supposed to be a nerd omnipedia, who would definitely know about those games.
Sydney and Dabbler are capable of this level of distraction in the middle of a grand scuffle, just imagine the first time they’re left alone together.
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In defense of Dave, names of demonic like swords are hard to come by. The name is appropriate, and Legacy of Kain IS an old series, with the last in the series being over a decade ago. So, its entirely possible that he didn’t even KNOW about the series. I’ve written up story ideas only to find out it was like 90% identical to existing (and old) stories I’d never even HEARD of.
That and again, naming demonic swords is a bit difficult, so its understandable he grabbed what sounded like a cool name.
I call for creating of international demonic sword names registry! Maybe IANA would agree to maintain it…
Oh c’mon. If i had a demonic sword i’d name it Fluffy the Devourer. As long as Fluffy not going to sue me =)
You have a bunch of menacing names that everyone can just ring here and there like – Soul Reaver, Armageddon… But not a single Fluffy =_= XD
+1
think the guys behind Dragonfabe would delighted to ave a sword named after one of the main villain’ pet Dracolich
I’d say when in doubt: RPG books. Example: Warhammer 40,000 has tons of daemonic items, most of the big ones named. My Chaos group in Black Crusade once sought the legendary Blade of Khar’akash, a Khornate daemon greatsword. Like seriously, fantasy RPG premade modules are excellent for this kinda stuff. Just find a number of ’em and start doing some word salad.
“Sydney and Dabbler are capable of this level of distraction in the middle of a grand scuffle, just imagine the first time they’re left alone together.”
And that, my boy, is how War World 3 started. I still can’t believe they thought a sightseeing tour to the Vatican was a good idea.
I actually have jokes written in case they ever get invited to the vatican, but it would be so contrived just to set them up.
Wouldn’t really need to be contrived. After all, some people (possibly including some high-ranking Catholics,) would see super powers as a heavenly gift, right? Who better to protect the pope from a possible imminent threat?
The Pope is already well protected. He has the entire Swiss Guard. And their super-powered leader, the Swiss Super-Guard!
His sword has multiple blades and a red handle with a Victorinox logo on it.
I want to +1 Random Guy so much right now!
Oh wow, he would be the perfect match for Dabbler! Ok, the Pope might object, if he has ‘demon issues’. But if his boss was ok with it, just imagine the happy couple walking down a cobbled street in the Vatican City. Dabbler starts limping, and Super Swiss-Guard leaps to the rescue. “Don’t worry I have a tool for getting stones out of hooves!”
Here’s the small version they made of his weapon for marketing purposes:
https://media.cleveland.com/pdq_impact/photo/bodygardjpg-029ebb039480f0eb.jpg
Actually I can see Heavenly Sword better placed at the Pope side as a bodyguard. Hmm, probably have to cover up a bit more with looser, non-skintight clothes. Heh, probably why she lost that gig.
Nah, there would be absolutely no issue for the Pope, Archbishops, and Cardinals with Heavenly Sword’s current attire.
But one member of the team, the waif-like superhero Oliver Twist, did leave due to being constantly creeped out by the looks he was getting from the clergy.
Actually, no, I can see this happening, and in a non-contrived way. All you would need to have happen would be to have the team get invited to Rome to deal with some kind of super-related problem–possibly related to that Arab-looking dude displayed before–and then Dazzler and Sydney have some down-time and decide to take a tour of the Vatican as part of their effort to tour the city. Since you can do this as it is (although probably with restrictions), I can see this happening.
Link to Vatican Tours
By the way, Dave, have you given any thought to what you’ll do in a couple of years if this actually takes off in a big way? Granted, the odds of that happening might not be good, but it might, and if so, you’ve already set yourself up with possible branch comics to explore other aspects of the ARC-verse, with ARCHON’s other teams, and, possibly, with other nations’ superhero teams (or other groups of nations’ super-hero teams). I don’t think you’re ready to branch out into that just yet, but…it might not hurt to start putting together ARCHON’s full roster, and keeping track of what happens to team members off-screen, so you can keep things consistent for when and if you DO want to add new comics.
I have enough content in my head that I could spin off an ARC-Light comic if I could find someone to draw it, and it’d be easy enough to set up a local or international super team under the Arc banner.
The International branch could be called InterARC
DaveB your butts always look good. Of course it is the more natural butts will be harder.
Two questions about the sword:
1) The teddy bear (as another poster noted) on the sword, is it a tribute to the Kingdom Hearts’s key chains, or to the numerous things dangling from purses, cell phones, backpacks and whatnot carried by most people in Japan?
2) Are the symbols on the sword influenced by Auron’s Banishing Blade Overdrive (Final Fantasy X)?
The “teddy bear” looks like a mogwai to me.
Zoomed in, yep, still a mogwai.
I would guess the Japanese influence. Dave has used several manga references before.
i will call it and say that is a kitty and she got it from the hayate x blade universe from hayate herself…
https://ex2.unixmanga.net/onlinereading/?image=Hayate%20x%20Blade/Hayate%20x%20Blade%20c031/0001.jpg&server=nas.html
Hah! That is similar. Not intentionally though. I just drew it like that off the top of my head.
I be noticing that 3 out of the 6 gems on the quilions are filled…. 3 to go!!!
I think it is three red gems, three white gems, three crystals on the blade and one googly-eyed lucky charm on the pommel. Plus the runes on the blade.
Not just Japan. It’s common here in the US too. I had various keychain things attached to my backpack (and later, purse/messenger bag) from elementary school on – certainly well before I discovered anime.
Can’t wait for the next page! Dabbler vs. the Heavenly Keyhole! It will be fun to watch, from a position of relative safety.
Oh Dave I wouldn’t worry about the sword name to much. It’s more or less an unintentional homage. Much like Heavenly Sword (her name is the name of a sword from “Tales of the Heavenly Sword and the Dragon Slaying Sabre” by Jin Yong). Besides you know how many times Gael Bolg, Caladbolg, Durandal, and Gungnir have been ripped off
It’s also the name of a flagship PS3 game of the same name
I wondered how Heavenly Sword is ignoring Dabbler’s glamour. No “not a lesbian” thoughts for a distraction?
Well, there’s her glamor, which is just a disguise, then there’s her Beholder spell, which shows an idealized woman to the viewer, then there’s her lust aura. Usually her glamor is constructed from a low key version of her beholder spell, like is the case with the blonde and pink hair form she’d been using, gleaned from Sydney’s idea of a comic book battle mage babe sort of thing. When Dabbler showed up in the ballroom during Sydney’s interview, she was pushing the lust aura just to jazz up her entrance.
Oooh oooh. Can your screen full of butts be male butts? ^_^
Well I suppose I need to learn to draw those as well.
“An assload of butts”
Is it Harem riding a donkey?
A seven-assed donkey.
You do know there are only 5 Daphnes, don’t you?
Do a mixed screen of male/female/animal butts (babboon butts for everyone :P), and then see how many people can correctly identify :D
i feel sorry for sidney. she really really wants to transform…
Heyyyyy, maybe one of the “unknown orbs” will turn out to be a “transforb”!
If Syd could transform, the first thing she`d do would be to: “Roll out!”
Speaking of video games, I kind of want to see Halo fight Heavenly Sword. After all, Halo is Xbox exclusive, and Heavenly Sword was only on the PS3.
And the console wars begin again!
Hahahaha. That is saddening. I posted this comic up to start a Grrl Genius threat on /co/ to get some discussion…
…and found out I was banned for 3 days for posting Furry.
…Who knew Dabbler counted as Furry?
Err… thread.
And Grrl Power. Damn I’m tired. Hahaha.
This might be carry-over attitudes being held against Dave’s earlier and very furry work.
If so, that’s a damn shame. /co/ is generally one of the better boards; perhaps it was just one jerkass mod?
1) A Grrl Power/Girl Genius cross-over would be awesome. Make it happen, DaveB!
Pretty please?
With sugar on top?
2) If you were banned for that, I would think there would be some way you could appeal it (not that I can say for sure, since I don’t even know what /co/ is).
I doubt that would work unless someone states that both universes operate on similar physics, which is unlikely as I’m pretty sure none of Grrl Powers computers are made of cogs and brass and I’ve never seen any superpower type ppl in Girl Genius that weren’t a horrible mad science abomination. If the two were to cross paths either A: Clanks/deathrays wouldn’t work B: superpowers wouldn’t work or C: the dimensional newcomer would bring their physics with them resulting in a chain reaction across the planet as people either gain superpowers or cars start trying to kill people.
Dabbler entering the girl genius world can be explained sciencey.
This is the only workable solution, she would count as a spark.
Given the jaggers and monsters created, appearance won’t be an issue.
Halo minus orbs could also work, just carry them useless in the new world on her back.
Some other supers would work, with or without powers.
Achilles could be fun if he can feel pain and needs to do his hair etc.
Your argument can be supported by the fact that Girl Genius heroes are individuals who have a specialised form of the Spark. Still as mad as hatters mind. And also retaining the henchmen attracting aspects, but just lacking or being weak on the gadgeteering side of things.
So super heroes cold be rationalised as individuals who have manifested some other core abilities instead of super inventiveness. Or, even easier, as you imply, to be the results of mad science experiments. Personally I view the Jagger monsters to be mini-superheroes. Agatha simply has an army of super sidekicks.
Actually, Achilles actually exists in GirlGenius. He just calls himself Airman Higgs.
Have been wondering what is up with Higgie, he seems to be someone we should know, or at least, know about, specially when he basically threatened to do much pain to that one female who seemed to have figured out who he is/was
I have always assumed he is one of Agatha’s relatives. A Hetrodyne (sp?) boy.
It does seem that way, the castle recognizes him as well, but with a different name
Three day ban… And the comic is Monday to Thursday.
I don’t see a problem in posting the next page.
4chan comic and cartoons forum?
Just trying to be helpful/neighborly.
OK, when I first viewed today’s comic, it was on my smartphone, and when Dabbler pulled out her sword it looked like she was pulling it out of the front of her pants…which I can TOTALLY see her doing. Made me giggle on the bus.
I just realized that this may be the first 4 handed sword I have ever seen, and that is awesome.
Der Vierhander!
Actually it’s a 2 handed, 1 side sword
So for normal people it’d probably be regular 2 handed
https://davebarrack.deviantart.com/art/Dabbler-vs-Zintiel-Wallpaper-337349719?q=gallery%3ADaveBarrack%2F31235700&qo=24
Is that an overtly elaborate cross-guard or does it protect around the bars as well?
There are longswords with rings on the side (and forward) of the crossgoard protecting the user’s hand on the flat sides of the blade, not just along the edge (limage search “2-Ring Longsword II – Curved Quillions”)? Did you intend those spaces to be finger-guard rings (just google image search “sword finger-guard” or “sword finger ring”)?
Because the design makes more sense (or at least be slightly more practical) if the pentagram-bar-things space out in four directions, forming a sort-of basket for Dabbler’s hands.
Or did you guys just went with a pentagram and said “that looks cool! use that!”?
Making it 3-dimensional in the form of a basket would help explain why the pentagram looks a little ‘squashed’ (the design looks good as it is though)
It’s basically just 2 dimensional, like an elaborate crossbar.
I’ve been working on making it 3d in 3DSMax, and it’s making my head hurt trying to make it work.
Calling Dabbler’s pants a ‘vast bag of tricks’ doesn’t seem like the sort of thing you should do if you want a long, happy life.
Ok, I misinterpreted the third panel, and didn’t understand the portal (mistaking it for her waistband). It did seem like an unphysical, inconvenient, and ouchy place to put a sword.
Dabbles has already mentioned how her pants are ‘minimum security’
Viadd … I think she’d actually consider that a compliment! Well, depending on who said it and how it was said.
Indeed. The only issue I can see is if she got too friendly. She’s part succubus after all. Max in the other hand. Just… no!
but it’s OK to call her shirt “vast tracts of land!” though :D
And, when appropriate, crumb shelf.
I recently found a nice found-footage-style movie about 3 teen-dudes getting superpowers.
Lets just say it doesn`t end too well.
ahh chronicle, good to start with, sort of stuff you could see pubesent boys get up to given the powers, dark and sad to end tho :(, could probally take notes from what they got up to for Halo’s past training heh heh heh
At least they have all their Uncle Ben / Gwen Stacy etc. moments done.
Shame though for the screwing of their identities.
Still wonder, what the heck that was down there that gave them their powers.
Well… fanfic time!
You have to admit, for a ff-style movie, it was damn well done.
The display of how teens would handle powers was really natural and believable, down to their handling of bad parts and the freak-out of doing stuff wrong and the wrong stuff.
It made me shudder to think that I would probably be not much different in their shoes, especially since I can feel for how they were treated and how it (didn`t) work out in the end.
Much surprise, suspense and tears.
You gotta watch it.
The moving the car bit was hilarious, and just what 3 teen boys would get up to with those powers.
“Don’t mind us, ma’am. We’re….Mormons.”
“And this time, it really was the black guy!”
And they are all almost falling over laughing.
All in all I felt that the movie handled the social aspects very realistically. And the special effects were pretty intense in the final battle as well.
Sad to say, that the movie depicted a truly realistic outcome, at least without the fallout afterwards.
And that dude only went on a partial rampage. Imagine what would’ve happened without him accidentially blowing himself up.
Blowing himself up? Their powers never even suggested that was possible. The worst drawback from the power was nosebleeds, not explosions.
The rampage did happen after the strongest member of the group did kinda “blow himself up” by causing a propane tank to explode with himself in the blast area. If he hadn’t been wearing his fathers firefighting outfit he’d have been killed, just as the shopkeeper no doubt was killed. His rampage was only limited to being as bad as it was because he was still suffering greatly from his injuries and because his remaining friend was trying as hard as he could to limit the damage he could cause.
I had to go look up Dabbler in Wereworld. You draw her better. ;-)
Well it is DaveB’s character
And WW was in a different style by a different artist (also, Dabbles in WW had 4 bewbs, the mass is the same here, just the quantity is half :P)
Soooo… Any bets that Heavenly Sword is actualy one of the nuns that Sydney had a run-in with outside the bank?
What? Nuns can be evil, and those ruler swats just scream sword training! …. Or maybe i hae been watching too much Blues Brotehrs again.
I thought their weapon of choice was NUN-chucks.
The Flaky Pastry web comic does have a nun character that fits the holy crusader category.
https://flakypastry.runningwithpencils.com/comic.php?strip_id=157
No, they use holy water sprinklers.*
* Medieval spiked flail.
Check out Rachel in Guilded Age, her weapon of choice (when not using her own bones) is a bladed ruler
They’re actually “Sisters”. Nuns have to do all work while inside the convent.
Ok, maybe my knowledge of the English language is failing me here, but… Shouldn’t that be sheathe?
You sheathe something in a sheath.
Well spotted, and you are correct. Very surprising for no one to have picked up on it earlier (that I noticed anyhow).
*awards membership to the Honoured Order of Easter-egg Spotters*
Might want to make that the Honorable Order of Easter Egg Spotters to avoid embarrassing acronyms. Technic-nic-nic-nic-ally, though, Easter eggs are supposed to be intentional. =OP
Indeed. But I work on the assumption, by way of affected courtesy, that Dave puts in even the apparent typos in purely to keep the hunters amused. ;-)
And, by calling them “Easter Eggs” shows that they have been spotted, without making the artist/author embarrassed/flustered if it actually was an error (less ‘pit-nicky’ and more ‘found ya!’, without being nasty about it)
D’oh! I’ll fix it.
You should really watch the Soul Reaver VO outtakes. Hilarious stuff.
Here’s one of em https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fgnLO7iJZaA
PEPPER ANN!
That’s who Sydney reminds me of…Whew, it’s been burning in the back of my mind for months. :I
…and not just her looks.
Does that burn the back of your mind as much as Sydney’s choice of food would burn from the front of your tongue to the back of your…? nvm.
I say roll with the name, at least initially! I’d LOVE to see Syd go off on Dabbler about the Legacy of Kain/Nosgoth factor of the name “Soul Reaver!” Who knows? Maybe the writer of the Legacy of Kain games got the sword’s name from DABBLER, instead of the other way around! She IS a Succubus, after all!
Yeah, it looks like Dabbler is pulling the sword out of her pants.
Random thoughts:
I am interested in what type of numbering system a species having 4 hands with 4 fingers would come up with. I’m guessing base-16.
Does Dabbler have good hand-eye coordination? (obviously not as good as some, having lost one of each.) If so, she could do some really interesting juggling tricks.
Which would probably mean an easier time with computers when they get invented by said species?
Assuming their technology follows a similar progression to ours. It might not.
Well on the Succubi side of the family they count base SEX, erm six.
The Doppleganger side follows the “when in Rome” rule based on how many they have at a time.
I was kind of thinking they might go base 8 myself as she seems to be in a semi permanent Spock pose when the hands are at rest. That would actually be easier for them to count as they could bend the single finger to mark a count and still be able to go around a second time for the other finger in a pair–and Succubi really like to go around a second time…
Oddly enough our number systems did not default to base 10. Early societies had a variety. One of which counted the digits on one hand, then moved up to the elbow and the shoulder. Leaving the other hand free to do the pointing. And base 12 was popular too. Because of how easy it is to divide up into 1/4 and 1/3. And we still have the legacy of that in how we measure time and arcs round a circle.
But, yea, base 16 is a very useful one, and I think that it would be very likely that her species would have settled on it. There is nothing intrinsically better about base 10. In fact it actually has less utility. Outside of just computing, there are a variety of mathematical and scientific functions which are easier to do in base 16.
There was a base 60 as well – divisible by 2,3,4,5,6,10,12,15,20, and 30.
Probably a system combining either base four or eight with base sixteen.
A bi-base number system.
Juggling would be interesting given the number of juggling systems used with only two arms.
When you said “assload of butts” I thought of Zach Wienersmith’s epic guest strip in GWS https://www.girlswithslingshots.com/index.php?id=1871 (nsfw-ish)
Oh, The humanity! SMBC is a great strip, even when he strips his characters.
seeing this and the siblings and incentive pick gives me a good idea what the General’s worst nightmare might be like.
Dispatch: General we have an emergency and need to dispatch personnel
General: why are you asking for permission just send them
Dispatch: um Sir, the only personnel available are Dabbler and Halo
General: standby I need to contact Higher
*mad laughter is heard in the distance*
and terrified screaming is heard from the Pentagon-
“NO, NO, WE’LL USE THE NUKES! LESS COLLATERAL DAMAGE!”
well played!
Not quite the end of civilization, but close.
Well at least she didn’t pull out Stormbringer! Because it would surely seek to corrupt and possess Sydney mistaking her for a long lost heir of Elric. (Pale, weak but wielding great power)
Probably been said already, but I’m just saw your edit in the blog about changing the swords name and I wonder why. It’d be like not name a weapon Heart Cleaver if something else had the name. Does the sword reave or otherwise do bad things to souls? Then why not use the descriptive name which would be naturally used in universe?
Reave means to Seize. It originally meant to Tear away. So yeah Soul Reaver translates as “Soul Tearer”
Soul Tear has a nice understated ring to it. Subtly invoking feelings of loss and sorrow. Poetic yet unsettling.
A lot like the legacy of Kain games then :D
And I got Skyrim/Elder Scrolls hits on that too, when Googling it.
*cries*
Okay, was wereworld the previous furry comic, or what?
Wereworld was done by a different person but Dave gave him permission to use Dabbler as a character.
I prefer a buttload of ass, myself.
We know Maxima, Super Hiro and Heatwave can all fly. But does Leon get high too?
J Edgar is gonna be doing backflips in his crypt, the first toker they hire.
He should not get his knickers in a twist. He had plenty of opportunity to adress social issues, or come out of the closet, before he ended up in the crypt.
Hahahaha! still enjoying the Vote incentive!
For a split second I thought she was drawing that sword out of her pants! That was a weird and fun split second!! XP
To her attacker it must seem like she pulled a replacement jutsu and left a monster in her wake. At least until her continued chatter registered as uniquely her I might be looking around for hidden witches… Even then maybe since why couldn’t a magic user do ventriloquism?
Of course you can draw asses, you draw breasts don’t you? Asses are just another set of breasts (no nipple of course) I dare you to open up any comic book and find one that that don’t have asses looking like that. Some even show the “clevage”
Being an ass fan, I deny that description. There is lots of variation in shape depending on pose and tension.
Definitely. Boobs lack the muscle structure that’s necessary for an ass to allow for a bipedal upright stance.
Really? In a comic? Where every woman has a bubble butt? People even joke about it :)
Some anthropologists believe that the similarities are causal and a result of sexual selection. So being a feature of our bodies which artists draw upon (so to speak), as opposed to being a case of sloppy technique. They can get away with it because, apart from those who have studied anatomy, the resemblances are close enough that our brains do not object to the differences.
As I understood it, the theory is that men are attracted to breasts because they have a similar shape to buttocks, which they are hardwired to be attracted to for obvious reasons.
So breasts and butts take the most effective shape, and attraction to the female chest is a ‘side-effect.
There are a great many web sites where dave can research butts! Have fun!
You know someone pointed out this is the first four handed sword and I think they may be incorrect. In the last panel she is showing 3 hands on the blade, in what is probably a “guard’ position. I am betting this is evidence of a sword and board technique that has 3 handed great swords (greater? Ultimate?) and a shield –probably magical but acting like a physical shield. After all being a Succubi, three hands on at any time and swapping out would be ‘natural’ (everyone has room for a threesome).
While it is possible she can use it 3-handed (or even 2-handed sing that’s how she’s holding it on the wallpaper with it) if you’ll look there’s a gap on the hilt that’s just big enough for her 4th hand.
Anyone else hoping that cybernetic arm allows some RAPID spinning of that sword?
Provided some inertia compensators, that could be an awesome attack!
Go look at Micheal Moorcock’s Antihero Elric of Melnibone – he has a sword called Stormbringer which keeps him strong and healthy by feeding on the souls of its kills.
In panel 5, HS has two white triangles on her hips that should be flesh colored, according to panel 7.
I hope the over-sexually mary sue xeno scum gets her ass kicked in the future.
over-sexualized*
Xeno? Simply for saying that Dabbles is ‘demony’ looking?
And where the frock do you get the ‘Mary-Sue’?
Considering how some of the others (Maxi, Anvil, all 5 Harem, Dabbles herself) are dressed, Heaven is downright conservative in dress
Xeno = alien.
Presumably the ‘Mary Sue’ means that Anon thinks Dave is a purple, four-armed alien woman. I did not deem it was worthy of a reply.
I would think Dave’s wife would have some things to say to him if he’d been hiding that from her.
A “Mary Sue” (or “Marty Stu” if male) isn’t necessarily an idealized author-insert. That IS what the term started out as, but these days…well, people tend to define it as (courtesy of tv-tropes):
“[…], the term “Mary Sue” is generally slapped on a character who is important in the story, possesses unusual physical traits, and has an irrelevantly over-skilled or over-idealized nature.”
They also tend to exhibit few flaws – if any at all. Dabbler seems – to me – to have flaws aplenty.
(this bit is more to Anon than Yorp)
And let’s face it; this is still rather early in the story. With the possible exception of Sydney, we don’t really know *any* of the characters well enough to say with certainty what they are or not.
If any of the characters could be regarded as a Mary Sue (the non-self inserted author kind) it would be Maxi
Yeah, was reading it as though Anon regarded Heaven as being xenophobic
Wait, were they talking about Dabbles? Or Heaven? o_O
If I ever need to make up names for swords I have a foolproof method…
Slam the keyboard for a random bunch of letters, maybe fix it up so its not too impossible to say. Then, for a Holy weapon, add “liys” or “aria” to the end, generally airy or Roman’y. For Demonic. Its “zor” or “thor”, generally a roar like sound. :P
Try it, makes naming things easy.
To draw a butt… draw a pair of boobs, with a “torso” below, and instead of closing the “shoulders” with a neck, leave it wide and make it hips instead, then take the “torso” and make it into legs, then make the top of the butt less like boobs and meld it into the hips and don’t put on nipples.
Viola… booty.